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Friday, October 29, 2010

And now for something completely different...

In the spirit of all things evil and dastardly, you can find below my submission to Insatiabear's Halloween Flash Fiction Friday challenge.

To get some perspective, you can read about the challenge here, on Insatiabear's blog.

We were given the following picture and challenged to write flash fiction (150-275 words) inspired by it and to include this phrase in our submission: "cold and dead".

Here is my attempt:

The many men she's had before,
The many souls, collided.
The many times he thought of her
With lips and legs divided.

But here she lies, a covered head,
A naked corpse below.
So stiff and still, a cold and dead
Reminder that she's gone.

But how can he, a silly fool
With matching stiff in hand,
Tell her that he'll always know,
That he'd always understand

That she is much more beautiful
Much brighter as a ghost.
A spirit, spector, spook or ghoul -
Softer shadow of its host. 

As though she could never quite be
As free as she is now.
The many times she'd made him see
How she would choke and drown.

The many thoughts cry in his skull
And weep into his veins
He's another man, by her, full
Of void, and lacked restraint.

He leaves her now, his many gifts
Lie in ribbons on the floor -
A testament, accidentally left
To another dead whore.

(I know, it creeps me out too! But I enjoyed writting something a little different, and I do so enjoy Insatiabear's challenges.)

So, against the flow of that dark little diversion, I leave you with:

Love, licks and lashings,


  1. Bravo! This is my favorite so far this week. Welcome to FFF.

  2. Wow! Terrific. Enjoyed reading this. Happy FFF!

  3. I can't recall a time when I enjoyed two new arrivals' entries quite so much as I did yours and OL's this week. I'm delighted you've chosen to join us and I hope we'll see lots more from you in the future.

    More specific comments: I'm always happy to see well-written poetry, particularly since there's so much crap out there. An interesting take on the theme; it did creep me out a little bit too, but then, what's Halloween without a little creepiness?

    Happy FFF.

    -- PB

  4. Intense emotions lead to great sex, creepy or not. Nicely done.

  5. I can hear the suspenseful organ music now. Sends shivers down my spine. What an intro!

  6. Thanks all for your lovely support! Very kind :)

  7. I love this time of the year! And I love creepy poems like yours. Great FFF :)

  8. Great stuff! I admire anyone who can write poetry. Poetry and porn.... Even better! Great job!

  9. This is really good! Plus, I love how at the end you say, I know! It creeps me out too! haha. It's definitely hard writing from a point of view that is not your own. Great job!

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